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The paper I have done in sociology, annotated bibliography, I do not think I did it perfectly. Although I talked in different perspectives, I did not write it in details as teacher expected. And my argument is not that strong to attract people to read it. I list the main ideas in the article and I analyze it from different perspectives. Vitamins is good for people's bodies, and people are never satisfied with their demand in it. They want to use those nutrition to fulfill their needs and they are controlled by the mainstream in the society. And they ignore the negative things they bring to people's bodies. I want to show my points in whole paper, but I think it comes with a lack of sources. It should be more supported by more sources. My argument is not strong enough to persuade people.